I read it again, and I'm not wholly displeased, though I think MKLovee's titles were too explicit. They should have been something pretentious like "Semper Tenebris" or "Grey Swallows In A Red Morning". In fact, I would have to sit and think of something that was so violently pretentious that it physically hurt me to type it out. And then repeat the title multiple times in the fic. After all, comedy is somebody else's tragedy. Namely mine.

God, that sort of thing came so easy to me back then. If I could write my original fic that fast, I'd be done by now. Many times over.