if you need an "off the street" reader, you can send it to me. i've found myself with a bit of time, and wouldn't mind reading something original that has nothing to do with anything i'm working on at the moment.

kara, your writing has always been good, and continues to improve. your dream will be realized one day. maybe not this year and maybe not next year, but it will. please don't give up on yourself.

have you contact the school to see if there was a specific area that you didn't quite meet their expectations on? ask in such a way that you are inquiring for continual improvement and development. it is common practice in the business environment, and shouldn't be out of place in academics either.

*hugs*