ext_14402 ([identity profile] w0rdinista.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wordinista 2007-06-14 12:58 pm (UTC)

Yeah, I agree. I like Anteros and Ianna a lot, but what's going on with them needs its own book. They've weasled their way into this story, and are slowly taking over. I think this happened because Liam and Diantha are kind of dragging. I need to change something -- maybe make Liam a arrogant, or less-established in his job, or SOMETHING. And Diantha needs to be less hands-off when it comes to the things she does. She doesn't get involved with anything, so it's almost impossible to make her get involved with anything. They also need to meet sooner. But mostly their characterizations need serious tweaking.

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